I like your third image and I think it looks super cool, but I am curious as to what aspect/quality in your life it applies to. You could possibly be holding a object in your hand that you think symbolizes something about yourself! Good work though!
I basically think that the photo could look more interesting in a different lighting, i like how the picture is symmetrical and the theme of a dark jacket and a dark backdrop is interesting as well. Overall, i think that the photo succeeded.
I basically think that the photo could look more interesting in a different lighting, i like how the picture is symmetrical and the theme of a dark jacket and a dark backdrop is interesting as well. Overall, i think that the photo succeeded.
I really like the last photo because it looks like you're reaching for the light. Is the blurriness a stylistic choice? Perhaps work on more emotional photos
Description: I see a picture of yourself, your jacket slightly out of focus, and a hand reaching for the light with the light slightly overpowering your hand. Analysis: The first photo has your face more in focus than your hand but the background contrasts away from your face. The second photo is a blurry picture that could be more interesting if you used a different type of lens at a different angle. The third photograph has a nice depth of field but could be focused more on the hand itself. Interpret: The first two photos, I feel, do not hold any symbolic meaning to yourself as a self portrait. The last one has many feelings to it and feels like you are trying to express yourself more. Evaluation: I like the last photo a lot but question the first two and think they could be improved upon.
I like the idea of the hand reaching for the light, but you could add more light and use a tripod(if you did ignore this part) next time to make it not blury
I like the idea of the hand reaching for the light, but you could add more light and use a tripod(if you did ignore this part) next time to make it not blury
First picture Description- I see how you are the subject in your own interesting way. Analysis- The angle is very interesting but the framing could be different Interpret- I feel like your position is intriguing and shows you but I don't see the reason for it as a self portrait. Evaluation- It is an interesting and eye-catching photo but is there a deeper meaning to it? I think an improvement could be to frame it with a different background.
I like your third image and I think it looks super cool, but I am curious as to what aspect/quality in your life it applies to. You could possibly be holding a object in your hand that you think symbolizes something about yourself! Good work though!
ReplyDeleteI like the picture of your jacket but I think you could have used maybe a different lighting to give the jacket more contrast.
ReplyDeleteI basically think that the photo could look more interesting in a different lighting, i like how the picture is symmetrical and the theme of a dark jacket and a dark backdrop is interesting as well. Overall, i think that the photo succeeded.
DeleteI basically think that the photo could look more interesting in a different lighting, i like how the picture is symmetrical and the theme of a dark jacket and a dark backdrop is interesting as well. Overall, i think that the photo succeeded.
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ReplyDeleteI really like the last photo because it looks like you're reaching for the light.
ReplyDeleteIs the blurriness a stylistic choice?
Perhaps work on more emotional photos
Description: I see a picture of yourself, your jacket slightly out of focus, and a hand reaching for the light with the light slightly overpowering your hand.
DeleteAnalysis: The first photo has your face more in focus than your hand but the background contrasts away from your face. The second photo is a blurry picture that could be more interesting if you used a different type of lens at a different angle. The third photograph has a nice depth of field but could be focused more on the hand itself.
Interpret: The first two photos, I feel, do not hold any symbolic meaning to yourself as a self portrait. The last one has many feelings to it and feels like you are trying to express yourself more.
Evaluation: I like the last photo a lot but question the first two and think they could be improved upon.
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ReplyDeleteI like the hand reaching for the light, but you could put a little more effort into it and make it not blury
ReplyDeleteYour first picture is really good but maybe you could try framing it so that the background is all black wall and not the vent
ReplyDeleteI feel like if you placed your main subject differently it would make the hand picture more interesting.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of the hand reaching for the light, but you could add more light and use a tripod(if you did ignore this part) next time to make it not blury
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of the hand reaching for the light, but you could add more light and use a tripod(if you did ignore this part) next time to make it not blury
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ReplyDeleteDescription- I see how you are the subject in your own interesting way.
Analysis- The angle is very interesting but the framing could be different
Interpret- I feel like your position is intriguing and shows you but I don't see the reason for it as a self portrait.
Evaluation- It is an interesting and eye-catching photo but is there a deeper meaning to it? I think an improvement could be to frame it with a different background.