I like how you can see a person's face in the background of your third photo. I also like the composition of the photo. I really like how the light looks as if it is coming out of the book. This photo overall succeeded.
I like how you can see a person's face in the background of your third photo. I also like the composition of the photo. I really like how the light looks as if it is coming out of the book. This photo overall succeeded.
I see the way you literally painted with light and enjoy the composition.
The first photo is a logo which is interesting, the second is very abstract and interesting with colours, and the last one is a space with light interacting with a person.
These photos make me think about different colours and the last photo is like he is being attacked by the light. The first photo feels more like an advertisement than an expressive painting and the second is an abstract photo.
Overall, I would say to work on thickness of lines and variation in styles. All your lines are thin and don't really interact with the subjects as emotionally as possible. I enjoy the last photo and the other two should have some more variation but overall very nice!
I really like your first picture. I think the simplicity and amount of light that exposes the person painting with light is interesting. I also appreciate the color that is used, it doesn't distract from the painting itself. The painting I think is unique and not too overdone. I think the space you created between the camera and the subject is also intriguing. Overall I find your picture successful, and the only thing I would improve on would be the slight blurriness of the counters. Good Job!
firt pic (lol) a face in the box with a line in the middle lens open in bulb theam is mystery wery succesful the idea of mistory is that the mac thing???
firt pic (lol) a face in the box with a line in the middle lens open in bulb theam is mystery wery succesful the idea of mistory is that the mac thing???
I like how you can see a person's face in the background of your third photo. I also like the composition of the photo. I really like how the light looks as if it is coming out of the book. This photo overall succeeded.
ReplyDeleteI like how you can see a person's face in the background of your third photo. I also like the composition of the photo. I really like how the light looks as if it is coming out of the book. This photo overall succeeded.
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ReplyDeleteI really like the first picture because you had it in your mind and then you brought it to this project and made it come out great.
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DeleteI see the way you literally painted with light and enjoy the composition.
ReplyDeleteThe first photo is a logo which is interesting, the second is very abstract and interesting with colours, and the last one is a space with light interacting with a person.
These photos make me think about different colours and the last photo is like he is being attacked by the light. The first photo feels more like an advertisement than an expressive painting and the second is an abstract photo.
Overall, I would say to work on thickness of lines and variation in styles. All your lines are thin and don't really interact with the subjects as emotionally as possible. I enjoy the last photo and the other two should have some more variation but overall very nice!
I really like your first picture. I think the simplicity and amount of light that exposes the person painting with light is interesting. I also appreciate the color that is used, it doesn't distract from the painting itself. The painting I think is unique and not too overdone. I think the space you created between the camera and the subject is also intriguing. Overall I find your picture successful, and the only thing I would improve on would be the slight blurriness of the counters. Good Job!
ReplyDeletefirt pic (lol)
ReplyDeletea face in the box with a line in the middle
lens open in bulb
theam is mystery
wery succesful the idea of mistory
is that the mac thing???
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Deletefirt pic (lol)
ReplyDeletea face in the box with a line in the middle
lens open in bulb
theam is mystery
wery succesful the idea of mistory
is that the mac thing???